The Whispering Pines
They say Pinehollow Forest is older than memory. The trees stand too close together, their twisted branches knitting into a ceiling that blocks the moonlight. Even in daylight, the air smells of damp earth and something… sour.
Arun had heard the stories — hikers who went in and never came back, campers who returned with white hair and no memory of the night. He didn’t believe them. When his friends dared him to spend a night there alone, he laughed and packed a flashlight, a blanket, and his phone.
The forest greeted him with silence — not the peaceful kind, but the kind that presses against your eardrums until you hear your own heartbeat. He walked deeper, passing blackened stumps that looked like they’d been burned centuries ago.
By midnight, the fog had thickened. His flashlight flickered. Then he heard it — a whisper, low and dry, like dead leaves rubbing together:
“Not yet… not yet…”
Arun froze. He swung his light around, but the mist swallowed it whole. The whisper came again, closer, brushing against his ear.
He ran. Branches clawed at his clothes, roots snagged his shoes, but he didn’t stop until he tripped and crashed into the ground. The flashlight rolled away, its beam landing on something half-buried in the dirt — a pale hand, reaching upward.
Then another. And another.
The ground moved. Fingers clawed their way out, followed by faces — empty-eyed, mouths gaping in silent screams. The whispers grew into a chorus.
“Not yet… stay… stay with us…”
When the sun rose, the forest looked still and empty. No sign of Arun. Only the sound of the wind through the pines — and if you listen closely, you might hear a faint, desperate whisper:
“Help me…”
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The Whispering Pines – Full Version
They called it Pinehollow Forest.
Not because it was empty — no, it was far from that — but because there was something about it that felt hollowed out, as if something had drained the life from it long ago and left a shell behind.
The locals never went past the old boundary fence. They said the land belonged to no one anymore. Not the government, not the people, not even the earth. It belonged to… whatever lived inside.
Arun was not from the village. He was visiting his cousin Ravi for the summer and had already grown bored of the tiny town. When Ravi warned him never to go into Pinehollow, Arun smirked.
“It’s just a forest,” he said. “Trees, mud, and mosquitoes.”
Ravi’s eyes hardened.
“If you hear the whisper, don’t answer it.”
That was the first time Arun heard about the whisper — a strange voice that called to people in the dark, luring them deeper until they vanished.
The Dare
One humid evening, Arun and a group of locals gathered around a small fire near the forest’s edge. The older teens told stories — some about shadowy figures that walked without sound, some about pale faces in the fog, and some about the whisper that could follow you home.
By the end of the night, someone dared Arun to spend one night inside Pinehollow, just beyond the old fence.
“One night? Easy,” Arun said, pretending to be braver than he felt.
The First Steps
The next day, with a flashlight, a blanket, and his phone, Arun climbed over the moss-covered fence. The air inside was different — colder, thicker, damp like a cellar.
The canopy was so dense that sunlight barely reached the ground. Every step crunched on old pine needles, the smell of rot strong in the air.
Arun walked until the fence was out of sight. He set up a small spot beside a fallen log and sat against it, scrolling through his phone until the battery hit 40%.
By nightfall, the forest became impossibly still. Not a cricket, not a single rustle of wind. Just silence.
That’s when he heard it.
The Whisper
It was faint at first, like a sigh slipping between the trees.
“Arunnn…”
He froze. His name.
The voice was soft, almost kind, as if it belonged to someone he knew. He spun his flashlight around, but the beam dissolved into the fog.
“Come deeper… it’s safer here…”
Arun’s heart thudded. Ravi’s warning echoed in his mind: If you hear the whisper, don’t answer it.
But something in the tone — gentle, coaxing — made it hard to resist. His mouth felt dry.
He called out:
“Who’s there?”
The Movement
As soon as he spoke, the forest changed. The air grew colder, his breath visible in thin clouds. The whisper turned into a low chorus, voices overlapping in strange, broken tones:
“Not yet… not yet… so close… so warm…”
Something moved in the fog — low to the ground, slow, deliberate. The beam of his flashlight caught a shape, pale and long-limbed, crawling on all fours. Its head tilted unnaturally, eyes too wide.
Arun stumbled backward, tripping over roots, but the thing didn’t rush him. It followed at the pace of a crawl, as if it had all the time in the world.
The Hands in the Soil
He ran until his legs burned, stopping only when he collapsed to his knees. His flashlight rolled away, landing in a patch of disturbed earth.
At first, he thought it was just roots sticking out of the soil.
Then one of them moved.
A hand — pale, dirt-streaked, nails long and black — pushed out of the ground. Then another. Then a face. Hollow eyes, a mouth open in a silent scream. More followed, dozens of them, all pulling themselves upward with jerky, unnatural movements.
The whispers grew deafening:
“Stay… stay… not yet… not yet…”
The Last Sight
Arun ran again, but every direction looked the same — endless, dark pines. The fog thickened until he could barely see his hands. Something cold brushed his shoulder. Fingers.
The whisper was right in his ear now:
“You’re ours.”
The next morning, hikers passing by the old fence found a flashlight lying in the grass. The lens was cracked, and the beam pointed toward the forest.
No one ever found Arun. But on still nights, if you stand at the fence and listen closely, you can hear the sound of someone running… and then, faintly, a whisper, desperate and far away:
“Help me…”
True Story By Karan🔥
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